how to make your writing emphatic?

from a writer to a another writer or any one else who wants to start writing a story or a poem, or even an essay you have to write more clearly and try more to get your point close, and for some one who has been writing for a long time i still have problems with that. but now i see to fix that problem more detail, just add more descriptions more adjectives and more dialogue. Describe the character more and the problem or the topic, along with the grammar.  If you can write more as well and just zone out. put in head phones or find a quiet place that helps you write more and get what you need done.